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Hyperactive girl,
Always ready to be fun
Smiling even at the worst moments
Don't ever frown
Overdramatic girl,
Leaving after so much and so little time
Wrapped up in boys always
Don't forget me
Poetic girl,
Always writing instead of speaking
Feeling things that I'm sorry I don't return
Don't give up on your dreams
Trusting boy,
Telling me so much always
Listening for advice
Don't forget to learn
Expressive girl,
Dancing just because you can
Being yourself always
Don't ever lose yourself
Hiding boy,
Wearing irony on your chest
Leaving your wants on the shelves
Don't be afraid of society
Silly girl,
Holding on when the fight is cheating you
Loving me when I don't play fair
Don't let go
Stupid boy,
Being so blind to the blatant truth
Being so likable when I need to forget you
Don't open your eyes
©2008-2009 ~Teh-Melted-Jello
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Each stanza is a person. Some of you are on deviantART and may be able to pick yourselves out.
A brief synopsis of who's here:
Crazy friend. She's always fun and I've never seen her anything but happy. Love her to death.
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Best friend. She makes a big deal out of everything and is crazy about boys and is moving away. D: She doesn't get to leave. No.
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Poet friend. She writes about everything. I love her to death and I'm going to miss her.
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Guy friend. He talks to me all the time and tells me a lot of stuff. Often, on the bus, he is like "Um, I have to talk to you" when it has nothing to do with me. He asks for advice always and tells me I understand. He's a nice kid.
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Amazing friend. Love this girl to death. She's always herself and always says what she thinks and is crazy and fun and awesome. Love her.
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Gay friend. He wears clothes that make me laugh all the time but doesn't buy rainbow things when he wants them because his parents don't know. Society's terrible to him, but he's amazing.
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Girlfriend. My feelings aren't fair, but she loves me anyway. She holds on so tightly to something that's cheating her anyway.
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Stupid boy I like. A lot. I like him more than the girlfriend, actually, and she knows that. [Hence the unfairness.] I really need to get over him, but he doesn't help.
Anyway. I wrote the last two stanzas first, for my signature, and then decided to expand on it.
BTW: Title=ONE LETTER too long. D:
A brief synopsis of who's here:
Crazy friend. She's always fun and I've never seen her anything but happy. Love her to death.
-
Best friend. She makes a big deal out of everything and is crazy about boys and is moving away. D: She doesn't get to leave. No.
-
Poet friend. She writes about everything. I love her to death and I'm going to miss her.
-
Guy friend. He talks to me all the time and tells me a lot of stuff. Often, on the bus, he is like "Um, I have to talk to you" when it has nothing to do with me. He asks for advice always and tells me I understand. He's a nice kid.
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Amazing friend. Love this girl to death. She's always herself and always says what she thinks and is crazy and fun and awesome. Love her.
-
Gay friend. He wears clothes that make me laugh all the time but doesn't buy rainbow things when he wants them because his parents don't know. Society's terrible to him, but he's amazing.
-
Girlfriend. My feelings aren't fair, but she loves me anyway. She holds on so tightly to something that's cheating her anyway.
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Stupid boy I like. A lot. I like him more than the girlfriend, actually, and she knows that. [Hence the unfairness.] I really need to get over him, but he doesn't help.
Anyway. I wrote the last two stanzas first, for my signature, and then decided to expand on it.
BTW: Title=ONE LETTER too long. D:
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You make me update my AOL info.
QXD
love you to.
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Don't call me a horse, I'm a unicorn.
I'm glad you love me. ;D
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I know I should be happy but I'm just scared instead
With the memories of last time racing around inside my head
I hope it's worth my effort to do this one more time
Just keep your promises and maybe I'll be fine
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"Those who can make you believe absurdities can make you commit atrocities." ~Voltaire
but I do love this poem =]
& I can say you're very creative
Great Job
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Live well & laugh often
;]
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I know I should be happy but I'm just scared instead
With the memories of last time racing around inside my head
I hope it's worth my effort to do this one more time
Just keep your promises and maybe I'll be fine
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I know I should be happy but I'm just scared instead
With the memories of last time racing around inside my head
I hope it's worth my effort to do this one more time
Just keep your promises and maybe I'll be fine
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Live well & laugh often
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